A good deal description basically consists of:
1. Why this particular product is better than other competing products
2. Why this price is better than the usual price for this particular product
3. Maybe a few descriptive or specification highlights - not just the whole laundry list cut and pasted.
I think this short one randomly pulled off Fatwallet is pretty good, even while being relatively short:
Fujifilm FinePix F20 6.3MP Digital Camera $138.93 Shipped
Posted in Electronics by K. Sebring Thursday, April 12th 2007 | No Comments | Email Story
Amazon has a good deal available on the FujiFilm Finepix F20 6.3MP digital camera
at just $138.93 with free super saver shipping.
A $30.00 rebate for this item is mentioned in this Hot Deal thread, but it is apparently not a sure thing.
Even without the rebate, this is a good price on this camera, which has great ratings with an average of 4.5 stars
from 26 Amazon shoppers.
Features include a 6.3MP CCD, 3X optical zoom, a 2.5-inch LCD display,
i-Flash intelligent flash system, dual shooting mode, and a NP-70 rechargeable battery with charger.